ah i REALLY want to finish! i just started it today and want to keep going, but i have a silly thing called school tomorrow (plus hw) so i guess ill wrap it up tomorrow. The stories great so far, but i hope in the next chapter we will see more of the reason Andre(a) is at the school (to protect Neo). ah so tempting to read more. by the way ur smiley faces are great and sososo cute. (o)

I so so like the story... but it definitely needs a sequel! So keep updating!

Wow! I so like your story... it's uhm... UNIQUE I say... plus you're a filipino... Weh... We're of the same nationality... please continue the sequel of this story... please... Cheerio!

Absolutely bloody amazing!

Hahahaha...grabe I'm nearing the point of complete insanity! Hahaha, ang GANDA! Putek! na find out ko lang na pilipino ka sa review ng isang tao... Hahahaha, tuloy hyper na ako! nakakaintindi ka naman ng pilipino rite? answer mo to ha! (pls. answer my question...hahaha in case, u dont understand me, BUT i doubt that!) Ate! :)) ang ganda ng plot mo, di lng cya pure romance may fantasy rin, LOVE IT! hahaha! sana nga makaupdate ka ng masmabilis! :)) Wish you have fun in writing ur stories as much as I have fun reading them! ICAN DEN AKO! FOR ALL ICANS OUT THERE TO KNOW! :)) PUTEK! Hahahah! Godspeed and gudluk! Oh yea! ICAN ka rin b? Dati I mean... HAHAHAHA...anywei, I just finsished reading this chapter...I'll proceed to the next chapie! NOW! hahahaha, grabe I'm so excited! Pls reply ha!

Adding you to my fav's...

(I stupidly forgot to before heheh ;D)

Yup, I'm a sucker for that mush and gush also...and your story actually doesn't have close to the amount of mushiness that most stories have. But it's still effective...and sweet. I can sense this all getting more complicated, and I love it..you are a brilliant author to keep up with this kind of stuff. Umbra and Penumbra, eh? And I bet that Andrea's friends and the rest of the Fallen Angel's are some sort of supernatural entity. I think Andrea's mother and brother are too, as well as Alex and Lex. Woot! I love this kind of stuff. I don't get why Neo has a dark aura, though, when clearly he isn't dark. Eh, well, I'll find out soon enough. -wink-

can;t wait to read this later :)

ooh i cant wait for reading the next one! :D

omg! i loved that story! dude you should be an author someday and make this into a manga! i can JUST picture it being one! i would buy ALL of the serious if you do become an author! i'll remember your name always! hahaah! i love this story so much! it's my first hearing about a story like this you know fantasy.. and for once it don't sound corny or gay at all.. it's umm... hm... so romantic and fantasy at the same time instead of sound corny or to over imaginative that it doesn't sound real but fake all the same time... it doesn't even sound like that! i love it! i'm so glad that you made part two! hope you make part three too! hahaa wellz i'm off to read the other part now!

I thought that Neo was captain of the basketball team... not Ethan.

oh this is great so far. i can't wait to see what happens next, cya later ~ Alenor.

I enjoy your writing and I really enjoy the idea of this fic. The characters seem creative and ideal and this really seems to be going somewhere.

The problem I have is the daughter's ferocity towards her father. Other than the fact that it can be chalked up to bad parenting, what kid throws furniture at her father and gets away with it? I may understand if their relationship was bad. I may even understand if she was your typical angst teen who hated her parents and wanted to run away. But in this particular situation... not acceptable and unrealistic. It seems more like something a spouse or a partner would do. Not a daughter (or a son for that matter) at his/her parents.

Other than that. No problems. Good work.

omg, there are totally so many questions left unanswered! haha. fab fab story, i love the fantasy parts. hmm the names remind me of some manga though.. fabulous and interesting story. off to read stage two! cya. (:

amazing story! can't wait for an update!