yay the basketball game was really fun! I expected Andrea to use that half-court shot again, which was integrated nicely into this Alexi Markov in is also very exciting since he knows she is a can't wait to see what happens next!

wow great plot, seems pretty complex with Umbra and Penumbra, although at the moment, I am a bit unclear about all these angels and how/why they are around Neo and Andrea. The three girls seems unearthly as well (I have read macbeth recently too)however it is intriguing to see real life mixed with some supernatural stuff.I am so addicted! great job on the story!

hello I just had to review to tell you how well the story is going! Neo's cold character is very interesting, especially the part where he thinks no one will love him.I am curious about the black wings and the "power" of Neo as well. These bits were good hints and I suppose they are foreshadowing something big about Neo, which I am eager to find out.

anyway, great job!

It is interesting that your characters have some unusual eye colors and hair colors, like in cartoons almost, although I can't imagine Neo's dark yellow eyes. I was not expecting Neo to be Nicolas Parker but I guess that is also why he is so well known, next to the fact that his dad is running for idea to have Andrea be in CIA.

you have good writing skills, and the grammar/spelling is almost free of error, which really is a relief to readers.

Just a question... what about the band? They can't just take the year off for school...

Man, I love this chapter. It's so intricately woven... so many coincidences, and yet what we dread never happens. That part where he thought he saw 'Andrea' in the bookstore was really great... I was so spooked at first. So it looks like he won't recognize her, unless maybe her eyes...

YAY!

Super cute! wahh..i love andrea already. her name, her description and VIOLENCE! yay! plus she has teh mad skilLz, like numchukus skills and computer hacking skills and liger drawing skills (hopefully) _ whe

i like this story! I can't wait to read Part Two- keep up the good work!

Hey, I love BMGS1. it's so cool! if you don't mind, could you read my story, it's called April. (I couldn't think of another name) Love your stories, bye!

wow! i like it!

omg! this is so interesting. i just found the story unfortunately, but i am glad i did. wow, so nick is noa. kinda confusing, but still i liked it. :D gotta read more

This is one unusual story! Can't wait to read more about the Angels. Are they gonna take over the world or something? The idea is pretty interesting. I wonder where you'd gotten it from.

I have never read a guy/guy relationship in that sort of detail before. Of course, I've read stories including gay guys, but not, you know which the touchy feely stuff. Anyway, Lanti's (was it Lanti?) view about love being stronger between gay people sounds pretty sensible to me. Though, I think that there's no difference in feelings between a guy/guy, or girl/gir/ and a girl/guy relationship, since they are born like that. Everything has opposites, right?

Still, you wrote the part pretty well, but I'm wondering that when you were writing the part where Adrian was trying to get Kaedra to be his boyfriend, were you imagining Kaedra as a girl?

Anyway, the relationship between Neo and Andrea is developing very well and I'm gonna continue reading the sequel.

haha... You've kinda got me hooked. I was reading from about 11:30PM to 3 in the morning last night.

I quite like the story so far - a very entertaining read in my opinioin... some parts really made me go hysterical. The character development's great so far as well. Can't wait for your next update.

I like this story. It's really good. No offence, but it's a little bit confusing for me. But that's just probably because I'm sleepy. Oh well, great writing.