| Reviews for Operation BMG: The New World |
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   Miss-Pirate chapter 9 . 12/27/2004 great story so far, i have to read the rest later! great job! |
| NomadicWriter chapter 26 . 11/11/2004 YaY! I love Stage one and Im going off now to read Stage Two! love it and keep up the GREAT writing _ -Kate |
| bridgette261 chapter 4 . 11/6/2004 woahness...i'm married? lolz...anyways...i think you should've done andrew instead :D -Katherine |
| bridgette261 chapter 1 . 11/6/2004 OH MAN! yea, you probably won't get this...but i just started reading your story...and my future story has practically the exact same plot! except for the CIA, body guard, and names...of course...president's troubled son gets excepted into big private school...can't...sister has to go instead because of public issues...yea...lolz...the more chapters, the more reviews! -Katherine |
| fallen-shinobi chapter 10 . 11/6/2004 ~wha.. so mr. davidson is like anzai-sensei... neh? ho-ho-ho... |
| Ridley Jack chapter 19 . 10/17/2004 Oh! Oh, and I meant to say, for the last chapter, that the pain in their backs are wings, aren't they? |
| Ridley Jack chapter 18 . 10/17/2004 Oh! Int'restin'! So Seta is Ethan, right? Mwa ha ha! They all like each other! |
| Ridley Jack chapter 15 . 10/17/2004 Oh! (and, hey, the review box is actually working this time!) Is the doc part of the evil dudes inc.? Is the dude that disappeared impersonating Adrian? He is, isn't he? I knew it! Ok, I really have to go read the next chapter! |
| Ridley Jack chapter 10 . 10/17/2004 OH! |
| Ridley Jack chapter 8 . 10/17/2004 Yay! J'adore Alex! And I meant to review the previous chapter, but it didn't work, and now I can't remember what I wanted to say. |
| Ridley Jack chapter 8 . 10/17/2004 Yay! J'adore Alex! And I meant to review the previous chapter, but it didn't work, and now I can't remember what I wanted to say. |
| Ridley Jack chapter 5 . 10/16/2004 Oh! (that was for the Andrea part) Did somebody drug him or something? So that part he said about Andrea was on live? And is this story gonna have shounen ai or hints of it? (I think that's how you spell it. I usually go with yaoi, but you guys don't use that on this site) because if so, you should warn people. Or maybe not. Lots of people don't read stories when they see that, so it's up to you. |
| Ridley Jack chapter 4 . 10/16/2004 Oh, so the one review where I'm mildly mean, it works perfectly. Oh, the irony of life. Damn those men (aka, Fallen Angels) are hot! I can see them, and I'm practically drooling! |
| Ridley Jack chapter 3 . 10/16/2004 I don't know if my reviews are working, but I'm gonna keep reviewing just in case. Ok, lemme get this straight. She's terrified of men, all men in general, yet she just kissed Nicholas/Neo on the lips, without prodding? Just because he looked so forlorn? I mean, I guess it adds to the story, the whole "I wanna make you happy" thing, but a lil unbelievable, don'tcha think? |
| Anarkali chapter 1 . 9/5/2004 hehe, great start! YOu've got a good plot going. Please update soon. |