Reviews for Operation BMG: The New World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() lol great story... pleas eupdate when have time. |
![]() ![]() woohoo. FINALLY. ) I am going on to stage two now. lalala. Whoa. Just wanted to say great writing.. and interesting plot. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OO! This was great! I can't write a long review because I NEED to go read the rest of it! This is so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah! that was totally the awesomest story! i luv how you made the fantasy part with Penumbra and Umbra *susanna* |
![]() ![]() ![]() gak stupid me forgot to check off the favorites box :/ |
![]() ![]() I love it so far, but you said that Andtrea was tall but then that she was 5' 8", that's not tall even for a girl, tall is my lil sis, she's 12 and 5' 10"! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, don't let jerkass flamers get you down. Besides, it looks like you got more good press than bad, judging from the number of reviews for this one. i'm going to add it to my favs so i can check back on it later. I'm looking forward to the chapters to come! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate all good writers, and I hate you! THis was written very well, and I look forward 2 looking at part 2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay, i'll cut 2 teh chase. numero uno. hanakima. numero deux: JUVENILE ORION! and... theres a third which u used subconsciously, and its getting kind of freaky! |
![]() ![]() ![]() heh. i had actually noticed the similarities to hana-kima (or whatever its called.), but this definitely has a distinctly different plot. I actually did read another fp fic similar to this one. The problem with all of these writers out there is that there are so many good ideas already taken! *pulls hair out* o well, it already seems interesting. |
![]() ![]() good start, but the last couple chapters were probably the most confusing things i've ever read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this so far. I just started reading, but so far I think I'm up to reading all of it. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this story a lot. I'm glad your doing another. However, you really need to work on your tenses |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I'm so glad you made a sequel! Oh yes please update your sequel xD you haven't updated since April X_x |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i love this story its so fascinating! great work! |