Reviews for Vampiric Goddess
gopie chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
That was so cool. Very visual and flows so well. Keep it up!
Nightly Rain chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
whoa.. very freaky at the end! but very good poem *adds to favorites* also very descriptive! :)
not sure yet chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
perdy, the descriptions are great
hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 1/13/2003
wow! i'm definitely impressed! that was an absolutely great poem, nice flow, great rhyme and everything...oh and I love's just perfect!

cio, hoellenwauwau
clifjumpr13 chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
I like this! Great imagery and the oldest fears of the unknown darkness combine to make this into a really creepy piece. A couple of lines sound a bit awkward, but nothing that ruined it. Very well done.