Reviews for Close Your Eyes
starlit blade chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
Hm. Pretty. But what are you going to do with it? There's the question. No room to put it in that head of yours unless you tidy up a bit.
Aftertaste of a Razorblade chapter 1 . 1/15/2003
Damn. That's...damn...

You're good at this poetry stuff, aren't you?
Karasu Tendo chapter 1 . 1/13/2003
I told you on your journal that I liked the poem, I think, but when I saw it up here I had to tell you again. 'Tis very sad, but very beautiful in its sadness. *hug* Be happy, A.H.!
Slash and Burn not logged in chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
This was so awesome. I loved it!
Accolo ab Renideo chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
Very cool. I love it. When you use 1 word in a line really gives it a GREAT touch. Wonderful visual. You've done an awsome job of setting the physical sceane, and of what you're thinking and suffering inside. This is gonna go on my favorites...
cherrymecha chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
awesome. great use of metaphors. spacing too. i like how you didn't use caps or punctuation. sets up a good mood. if you change the formation of it slightly, it could be a great song.