|Reviews for Close Your Eyes|
| starlit blade chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
Hm. Pretty. But what are you going to do with it? There's the question. No room to put it in that head of yours unless you tidy up a bit.
| Aftertaste of a Razorblade chapter 1 . 1/15/2003
You're good at this poetry stuff, aren't you?
| Karasu Tendo chapter 1 . 1/13/2003
I told you on your journal that I liked the poem, I think, but when I saw it up here I had to tell you again. 'Tis very sad, but very beautiful in its sadness. *hug* Be happy, A.H.!
| Slash and Burn not logged in chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
This was so awesome. I loved it!
| Accolo ab Renideo chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
Very cool. I love it. When you use 1 word in a line really gives it a GREAT touch. Wonderful visual. You've done an awsome job of setting the physical sceane, and of what you're thinking and suffering inside. This is gonna go on my favorites...
| cherrymecha chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
awesome. great use of metaphors. spacing too. i like how you didn't use caps or punctuation. sets up a good mood. if you change the formation of it slightly, it could be a great song.