Reviews for Real Pain
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
I know how you feel. An excellent poem, though you might want to consider changing it to a poetry format. Excellent work my friend!
Sunathaer chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
Well, it's good, but the format needs to be redone, m'dear. I know exactly how it feels.. (what you're talking about in your poem) Anyhow, good job!
Frodo chapter 1 . 2/6/2003
You may want to work on formatting so the reader can understand your poem better, but I do like what you are trying to get across. It's good. Another thing, you may want to accept anonymous reviews. You'll get more that way. Good work though.

-Frodo