Gah! That was awesome!

This is a descent story within the vampire genre. You did a good job with the description. I did a twist of my own with the vampire, I made them animal - namely immortal bugs, ie the story "House of Spiders." This is a very dark and well put together write.

wow! That's one spooky story! great work! Keep it up! Oh and as for the arm, in my poem, well, who knows what it's doing there, or if it's real or not...hehehe*evil laughter*! ;-)

M! Creepy! Yum! Those blasted vamps, just so cunning... Tasty!

Great story! I don't think it was dragged out (I'm sure there's a better word to use there, but I can't think of it right now) at all. I was totally captivated the entire time-now I'll have to go and see if you've written anything else, and if you have, read it! Lol. _ Keep writing; it's obviously one of your gifts.

~Autumn Night~

Interesting.I loved it. Keep up the good work -

Aww that's it? :( It's a nice little story though!

this is pretty good. a nice short read. thumbs up!

Not a bad story. Nice twist at the end, though I think it was dragged out just a bit too long with the explination.

I know, I know, trying to drag out the suspense.

Anyhow, still a good read, and it would be interesting to see you continue this, with the challenge of now getting Tom out of this mess.

*eyes widen* Wow. That was . . . interesting. Original. Or, as my Scottish ancestors might say, "Verra verra scarry." And the other reviewer is right- he's almost hypnotic. Needless to say, I love this story.

Wow. Great job! You do, indeed, make him almost hypnotic. I like this. :-)