Reviews for Maybe It's Destiny |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sao: You finally updated this story! HOS: Yay! And how cool! She's the last of a race of ppl on another planet! Sao: uh..., that's confusing, sorta. How does this Johnson guy know this? Is she going to go back? HOS: Update soon, we have got to read more stuff, so peace out! ~Sao & HOS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. It's kinda boring, if you ask me. You need smething to hook the readers. And more description on your characters and the setting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HELLO! This is the first one I've read of yours. I think it's very interesting. It could be a poem...anyhow...I'm thinking it's groovy..'T' |
![]() ![]() ![]() TEE HEE! AH HAH! *Runs around in circles* So, I accidently told her she could talk. I'll read what of this I haven't but I lovies it. EBWIL! |
![]() ![]() Emsy: MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE *slight pause* MORE MORE! This is groovy! I likers! Tell me when you get more. Davie: Pretty . . . erm, groovy. She stole my word, but anyway, I like this too. What's gonna happen, Ishee? KK: *drools at Davie, then snaps his head up* You should make Davie a cameo! Captain: I liked this a lot! I couldn't understand some words though, but still, CONTINUE! Ken: Hey, this makes me lok inteligent like I cann rite! In conclusion, you should continue very sooners! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sao: I really, really, really, really, really enjoy! HOS: But the suspense is killing us! What was the image that had been a dream? Did she nearly kill herself? Good thing she didn't. Sao: Oh, and we can relate to the whole homework thing. I've been trying really hard to keep up w/ my own stories. I have three. Two originals, and a Harry Potter fanfic. HOS: No one cares, Sao! Stop advertising! Sao: I am not advertising. I am merely relaying info, letting her know that I can relate! HOS: Suuuuuuure! Write more Neptican! Pu-leez! Sao: HOS, begging does not become you. Now, go. We have to get off 'fore Mom starts nagging. And you know she can go on for hours. HOS: Yeah, you're right. *shudders thinking of how long a lecture can last* That would waste away like, a year of our life. ~Sao & HOS |
![]() ![]() ![]() ack! this is sounding so good! I Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() K something happened last time I tried to reveiw so this might be my second review but whatever 'cause this sounds like a really good story in progress! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds promising. There is a lot of plot potential here, so don't leave us guessing! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sao: *looks at cliffie and...jumps!* HOS: Nooooooooooo! *grabs Sao by the feet* Sao: Let me go! I don't wanna have to wait! So cruel! She left it at a cliffie! HOS: *drags HOS away from cliffie kickin' and screamin'* Geez, you're so melodramatic. Sao: Fine. But I'm gonna sit here until she writes more! *to author* So get to writing! ~Sao & HOS |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOS: Don't insult the sheep! Sao: Yeah, what did they ever do to you! J/P :P We're just being silly. We'll go to the next chapter now. ~Sao & HOS :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds good so far, but I personally find the definitions kind of annoying. I know you were trying to do something with them but the thing is, I kind of want to just read the story and definitions of what the storie's talking about. If only the first chapter had those then it would be OK but if the whole story did I think people would just get agrivated and stop reading it all together. But all in all this sounds like it could really go some where so keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sao: Hello, I am Sao. This is my other self. HOS: Hello. In case you're wondering, HOS stands for Her Other Self. Sao: Now, all I have to say is: IF YOU DON'T WRITE THIS, I'LL SIC MY RABID, SEVEN-FOOT, RED-EYED, FLUFFY AND WHITE, MAN-EATING RABBIT AFTER YOU! HOS: You have been forewarned. This is no idle threat, it is a promise. *shivers* You really don't want that rabbit chasing after you. Sao: *looks around* Hey, I'm the first to review this! Don't worry, though. It's only a matter of time until ppl start reviewing. I'll even advertise for you in whichever one of my stories I update next! But you have to write this! ~Sao & HOS |