Very well written, Obs and Harmony. I now understand the battle you were talking about when you showed me those pictures. Before it had been rather...undistinguished? Indistinguished? I don't know. But very well written.

SakuraCC87 told me to read this story, so i did, and its great! good job on it, but what ever happened to Dakota and people?

i like the faye stories! they're sweet :)

Oh really cool story. I'll read more later, but it's really cool you thought of this world yourself.

-Belle the Shadow-Cat

: EVen the brightest LIght leaves a Shadow::

Hey like you said before can't review the same chapter twice... thanks for your reviews... and I'm anticipating the rest of Downfall! as well as SotC! My email is and my aim is SakuraCC87 I really hope to hear from you!

Hey! I'm returning your review! I spent the whole night reading your story and it's really really good! Hope you continue on with it! Oh, and if you do get SotC published into a book by Tor, do you mind sending me a copy? ;p J/P. but it'd be appreciated if you do send me the whole story!

You know, giving me little bitty tastes of other things like this doesn not help a reader's health. ::glare:: as usual, mucho goodness, and keep it up, and write more. and. stuff. yeah.

~steen

Yay! Moreness! ::laughs insanely:: I have been busy, but I have finally made my way over here and reviewed! Go me! It was, as always, fantastico. And Tor would be severely remiss in not accepting The Son of the Challenger. ::frowns:: They are, however, usually poopy-heads. Bah! Positive thinking! Eh!

Your perseverence inspires me, however. I am off to do more stuff. Tata!

~Steen

i like this chapter! it's really interesting. and i totally envy your imagination. creating a whole world . and writing a whole book. *sigh*

HMMM! Could a true Jalbaid be... the offspring of TWO JALBAIDS? Or am I making things up? ::shrug:: Oh well! Fantastico as usual! More, I say! More!

~steen!

i think i understood that ... a lil confusing. but really sad :( well written, my compliments

ana

This is a very well written story. The glossary does help to explain the terms in the story. The dialogue is good and makes a person feel like they are there. Good description and action throughout.

Of course I liked it! ::nods:: I love this story! Hurrah! You know, the only good thing about being sick is I get to stay home and wander around all day, reading yummy goodness and stuff. So is Dakota a Jalbaid? That's the impression I got. Or maybe he's some other type of magic-enhanced person. I don't know! UPDATE! RAHR! ::meanders off to find a drink:: My throat hurts. ::sniffle:: UPDATE! NOW! BAH! GOODBYE!

~adulaith (steen!)

I'm your only review? ::blink:: People are stupid! They obviously cannot appreciate talent when they happen across it... *muted grumbling* Any chance I might be able to hop on a fic with either of you? I'd love to write something with people who actually know what they are doing *most pointedly does not comment on any of her friends, who are all writing-challenged* Just a hopeful idea! (inore the sad puppy-dog eyes) Anyway, I WANT MORE! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! It's book-quality and tres entertaining. Buenos Noches,

~adulaith

Damn! I'm speechless! Maybe I should find myself a co-author. I love to write fantasy, but I can't simply create an entire world in my head, I get too much into detail and leave other things too vague. But this was incredible! Keep it up and continue SOON, I'm putting this on my favorites list. Hurrah!

~adulaith