Reviews for Unusual Bonds |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yesh, drama. What a mother. Once again, nicely done. A little rushed, I think, but flows pretty seamlessly. Unfortunately, this doesn't look like it's going to continue, and what a shame too. You have something going here. Ah, well, I enjoyed what I read. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "She didn't know what Mark wanted to hear." Insightful, this line! And the fact that no one in the village knew Relena had left. Sorry for being a pest. I'll hold off reviewing till the chapter seven. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "One time, she wrote 'Eat Shit' on a piece of paper, and taped it to her TV, right in plain sight, if one was to even glance in her room. She left it up for a month before she took it down, disgusted at the lack-of-response." Speaks to her character. Heh. The back-and-forth firing of witticisms keeps me spinning. Wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Mark stroked his goatee pensively." *guffaws* I don't believe you! That is too much. I really cracked up over this. The two of them are simply hilarious. And what a unique idea for a story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() finish it! finish it! finish it! i luv it so finish it! its good, keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a feeling.. you are no longer writting and it really sucks.. I think you have potential I like the story so far.. Maybe you might just start writting again.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do you realize how long it has been since you updated? The thing by the title says 04-12-03. That's a long time... Please update soon, I really like this story! |
![]() ![]() I almost never review things after I read them, but i dunno. Your story, im not going to say that its amazing, sorry, but there is definately something about it. I sounds really personal. Its good too, and the point of this review besides to ramble it to say i hope you get everything sorted out. sorry for the review, im really not that good at writing them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I read this story months ago and I loved it but I just never got around to reviewing it because to be honest I'm not a good reviewer but I'm waiting for you to update and I thought the more reviews you got the quicker you'd be. I'm not trying to rush you or anything I just love this story! So please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well i don't blame Amy for being pissy! Poor child. Ahh...i just feel bad for her. Very good! This story is so great, but it doesn't get updated nearly enough *hint hint* |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey. cool story right now. road trips r cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was cool. I liked it. Write more or you will feel my wrath. And, oh...it will be wrathful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... this is a wonderful story! Such an original plot... I'd love to be friends with a guy like Mark! He's so cool! Why can't there be any guys like that around here! Good story, I'm adding it to my favorites list! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I NEED MORE! -Drik Out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ye GODS! That's awesome! Their banter was awesome, and Amy's little speech to her parents...wow... There's only one thing wrong: It's not long enough. |