Reviews for Spiderweave
avani.awakening chapter 1 . 4/25/2003
Nice to see someone who has a good storyline and can actually write well...I've been running into a lot of...otherwise. Ya. Good start, watch your dialogue. At points you make them say things that people don't say in real life. But otherwise, fabulous...can't wait for more.
ssjbookgirl chapter 1 . 3/24/2003
that was good but a little boring. i hope that the next chapter will have more action.
Karasu Tendo chapter 1 . 1/19/2003
Hm... well, the beginning sets everything up nicely, and makes an interesting parallel... but I think I need to see more before I can tell you if it's good or not.

*laughs* Just kidding! It's a great beginning. But I would like to see more soon. _
Angelic Hooligan chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
This is the second time I'm reviewing this because is a bastard!

So far, so good. I like it. The way they talk is kinda weird, but I'll get used to it. Keep going!