this is SOOOOO good!

sounds really good

Hey, i don't know if you still use fp or what but i coulnd't not review and tell you how amazing you are T_T

Omg, firstly such an amazing original story, its beautiful

I love how you seem to know what ur talking about and it really transports the reader into another world (forgive me for sounding like im analysing a text, i've just released myself from some intensive english studying/assessmenting) on that note i coulnd't quite help noticing some wonderful themes of seeming vs reality, dominance of the patriarchy and the quotation "Frailty, thy name is woman!" comes to mind XD

Anyways, loved your characterisation and how you write, it makes it so easy to read and so engaging. One thing that sort of bugged me was the double standards where Tyler can sleep with women but he comes back to find Jenny cheating and has a hissy fit about it, I suppose you could pass it off as part of the time, but i just didn't think it really fitted his character.

hm i also woulda liked seeing more of Delaney

yeah but love love love XD

this story is adorable. I know what it's like not to be able to finish but if you get bored one day and want to write some quick ending chapters i know soo many people would read them.

So...I finally read this story after seeing it on so many author's favorite's lists.

I freakin love it.

This has got to be my favorite story so far, like ever.

I know it's been awhile, but if you could, I would like an update on this story. Not like a chapter or anything, like maybe knowing that it's on permanent hiatus.

However, I hope you're still writing! :)

And if you aren't, good luck with wherever you are in life now :D

i really liked it can't wait 4 the next one please keep writing

oh my god. i swear this is the best story i have EVER read on fiction press... and that's saying a lot because i've read some really good stories! PLEASE update soon... i don't know if i'll be able to handle not finding out what happens next. I LOVE IT!

YOU, sir, need to update. what has been going on?

this story has come to such a complete and sudden halt. i love it so much i almost can't believe it. there MUST be an ending! gr.

Ok I'm warming to Tyler more as each chapter goes on by. And I think I'm finally over the age difference thing, so that's cool:)

Tyler seems like a very handsome, coolio bloke and yes, he has his flaws like every other human being but I think he truly loves Scarlet, and I think that's the most imp. thing.

Wow, you've got me converted in rooting for Tyler. Now how the hell did you manage that? *very puzzled*

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Aw jesus...I knew Jamie had to show his true colours somewhere along! And boy...what he did...not nice, man. Not nice at all.

Tyler seems bit of a hypocrite, yunno sleeping with Allison then having a go at Jenny for being like him. Well, all I can say in Tyler's defense, was at least he didn't get caught :D:D

Boy, very gripping story and makes me think a whole lot more than it should! ;D :D

Does this mean he'll ever return to Scarlet? Well, lets go find out!

Thank god Tyler didn't take her virginity. I mean he's cool and all that, but I'm sure there's someone out there more...suited for her (& mre near her age). I dunno, I'm just glad things didn't get TOO far.

Phew. So nothing major happened...Well disregarding this horny guy of 22, suggesting clandestine meetings outside inn...oh well, could have been much much worse.

Love this story still. The dialogue and descriptions flow VERY EXTREMEMLY well and now i'm off to the next chappie!

oh no! pls don't tell me he's going to try something with a FOURTEEN year old...or maybe, back then it was normal or something...in that case, i'll be VERY open-minded and urge this mysterious bloke and Scarlet to ignore me completely and do whatever...they're doing.

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*Stares dumbstruck at computer*

Boy...that was really something. I love this first chapter! I'm glad you didn't go into graphic detail in "that" scene, cos even if u didn't (thank god!), it conveyed all the anxiety of the character's feelings.

Ever seen the legend of zorro? u know, with antonio banderas and catherine zeta jones? i have a feeling this uncle of scarlet's going to pretend to be the good guy like that dude in the film after he killed czj's character's mum.

i'm off to read the next chapter! wish me luck! lol

I would love to see what happens.