Reviews for A Life Not Worth Living |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey th8is is really getting good... God job! |
![]() ![]() Sorry about my anonymous name. It's 5:49 A.M. and I'm tired. I like your story though. You probably won't update because it's been, oh... 7 years. I would like it if you updated though. (: -LGUGHGIFIF... uhm SURPRISE |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a good story so far! i cant wait to see where it goes. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg UPDATE! This is amazing. Why'd she have sex with her very first boyfriend the day they hooked up? Sorry i just have this thing where i dont think teenages should be having sex. ] Still love it! update please ] God her teacher is so yuck! |
![]() ![]() Hey. I enjoyed your story so far. However, I have a few critiques to help make your story better. You have a few word errors. Instead of saying, "And we haven't heard since," you say, "And we haven't heard sense." Also, your context is a bit confusing. For example, the mom says, "Thank you honey," for the breakfast, but later the girl complains that her mother never says thank you for anything. You see what I mean? You should get someone to proof-read it before you submit it so that the readers don't get confused and it makes sense. Other than that, I like your story. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gag, that teachers sick! But love the story1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() its good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() review plz! i wanna know what happens nxt! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is really good! I hope everything works out okay for her! Please update soon, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really really great story. I guess you're not going to keep updating but I would love to read more of this! |
![]() ![]() great story... i'm waiting for more.. you really should update soon.. keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god, this story is so good! I love it all... you HAVE to continue. PleasE? PLEASe? This is great! I swear. ~Twi |
![]() ![]() i have a cat now but, within the week, my grandmother is gonna kill it because we cant afford cat food |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I feel sorry for Heather and what she goes through sucks. Post the next chapter soon! |