Reviews for The Battlefield
Terry Pratchett chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
Very good poem! Some grammar issues tho'...
Forget Yesterday chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
Actually, a really good poem- you may want to go over it again or have it beta-read though- there are a few grammatical issues that don't quite make sense- for example "The species to warlike/To prone to destroy"- that really doesn't make sense.
Dreamweaver2 chapter 1 . 1/18/2002
hhhmmmm... how interesting, I like it! It leaves a lot of thought in my head...
Anisky chapter 1 . 2/9/2001
I like it a lot, you have a great grasp of language... my only complaint is that the rhyming seems to take something away from it, makes it seem not as serious as it is... but besides that, the poem is written really well.
Spiritual Rock chapter 1 . 1/7/2001
This is a really good poem!

I like it!
Raptis chapter 1 . 11/22/2000
Very true
Solthar Rygelsun chapter 1 . 11/22/2000
I thank you for your review
Tannith the dark princess chapter 1 . 11/22/2000
Your poem is very powerful. I congratulate you.