T-this poem! It discrives Envy(from Fullmetal Alchemist)! This poem reminded me of Envy becasue he, too, changes forms and won't let others see his "true self." All who did, died.

I also think that this is a wonderfully writen poem. It is amazing.

I think alot of people feel this mater who you are somone always see you once said "No one knows who you even your self."

I did think the poem was written very said and to the point.

...Wow, that's really good! Very well written.

X.x Dude. I like... Suck at poetry, man. :D That was so great, and even better than a poem, it would make an awesome song. So, I was wondering.. x.X I have a band, and when we get around to recording crap, can we maybe possibly maybe use this for lyrics to a song? xx

:D Here's a link to our band site:

rebellion/carbon

x.X I'm the drummer, but I'm also the one who started the band. -; So it's MY band... :D And we're changing the name per MY request, so if you have any suggestions, lemmie know! Luff your stuff.

With All Due Respect,

WindStarsAndWave:D

O.O

hmm..

i see you as a...

a...

a...

a..

a.

a..

a...

a...

yes..

i am bored..

BUT..

i see you as a..

a...

*thinkthinkthinkthinkthink*

*puts hand on mouth like Sarah*

HM...

An...

ORANGE!

WEE!

and.. a mixture of whatever-you-said-thingy..

OH!

and also a..

a..

a..

TEDDY BEAR!

KAWAI!

XD _

okee i go now byebye!