Reviews for Rumination
may chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
i decided to comment since you said 'please review' and no one did... how rude!(btw... i got this link through your friendster profile.. rather brave of you)anyhow, on with my thoughts:i especially like the last i have a it rings a lot of not, for all of us.

i think half of the time, when we put pen to paper, it is so we remember. as painful, or joyful as it is, it would be even more painful, to forget, and never learn.

it is something that is hopeful. all of this writing is. writing for expression, for validation, for company, for questions answered. i just hope it helped.

sometimes though, the only thing you can do, is to take that copy, burn it, and turn in your ashes for beauty. it's the greatest gift (apart from jesus) that saves us from the torment of our own soul.