Reviews for Fate's Games |
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![]() ![]() ![]() what a sad chapter. xD it's sad! I have no idea what to feel for Maar.. I mean, he's so mean to he turns nicer to Megumi! My sister's telling me to get off. darn her.. |
![]() ![]() NO! WHY IS IT THE CUTE ONES ALWAYS TURN EVILL? OH NO! BUT THAT IS A GOOD TWIST. A BOY WHO SAVES A PRINCESS'S LIFE AND DOESN'T REMEMBER AND IS NOW EVIL. very good very good. Yoko! |
![]() ![]() I thought it was pretty good. (sniff) It was so sad that her family died and poor Maar! It was good to read. Yoko! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really quick about the other story If darkness could befriend. I DO NOT THINK THAT THE RULER IS KIVE'S FATHER I MENT TO WRITE BROTHER!.k now that over with. COOL CHAPTER! AW isn't it sweet he was being nice to her and he was confo-GIVE MAAR BACK HIS WEAPONS! HE DESERVES THEM! HE COULD KILL YOU IF HE WANT-IT soo cut how nice he was to her when she was crying, and how he hugged her to make her fe-Maar wants his weapons back! GIVE THEM NOW! OR RINA IS GONNA GET IT! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-She was just soo helpless and innocent. Rina is perverted. and weird. I would squeaze her too just like how Maar does, and laugh just like this MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-*both sides of me*-! ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good good! I like it! ;; .hack/Infection rocks~! ..okay just had to say it..go buy it now! next chapter please! I was thinking about writing fantasy I'm afraid it'll turn out like the CCS and Toff one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like! GO on! Please add more n more n more n more chapters so it'll never end! ;D hehe, anyways, great chapter. Can't wait till chp. 3, see yao soon, Megumi-chan~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() GO GO GO! Keep up the beautiful work...You know Maar is really cool! I'm mean like I respect him a whole lot! He is like really cool! okay now I sound really dumb! Megumi is cool too! I think shes fun, and FUNNY! Just like a person i know named stefunny! (stephany stefunny get it?) I saw a mistake in your typing! YOU WROTE MATT INSEAD OF MAAR! ! !.. okay i'm now going to bed... it's 12:33 on a school night! *crys* WAHHHHHH I DON'T WANT SCHOOL! k night. knight equals knight! okay Sand i go to bed! But i don't wanna! go! no! I could do this forever! GO! NO! GO! NO! GO! NO! GO! NO! GO! NO! GO! NO!GO! NO! GO! NO! GO! NO! GO! NO! fine... |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO why did you kill kuriko? WHy? He is soooo coool! *sniffle* I WANT MORE! Kuriko is soooo cool! Let him live!*sniffle!* *grabs you and shakes you yelling* WHY? WHY! WHY! GOOD JOB ON CHAPTER 7! WHY? WHY? *cries* WHY? *lets go and gives you a big smile* OKAY! NOw i have got that out of my system... BRING HIM BACK!... k bye! /\_/\ '.' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, sup. I'm reviewing, like you commanded. *sighs* Well. This story is way sad. I mean really sad. It's better than your first one in my opinion. I think it's very good...but sad. Yeah, it's really depressing. Now I'm not gonna be able to concentrate in school because of you! That was sad. That's a truly sad story. Well, please update. Wait...wait. I saw you writing the next chapter. ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude! You pro! o.O; You're so good at making stories! Please continue! Kia: "Yeah, continue!" ...uhm, what she said. Gogogogo! :DD |