Reviews for Equalizer
FireFoxCP chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
I pictured some grizzled war verteran chomping a cigar, with a thick accent, talking about this one to some young whippersnapper. Great work with this one! :)
The Jaguar chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
Hmm quite interesting account of the god damn get slim quick bullshit. Like why cant people get off their ass and go to the gym for a change. I liked the style and format. I didn't like the fact that the guy went back on his story ( Oh i forgot to tell you...). other then that it was great.
Evil Lil' Katbird chapter 1 . 4/4/2003
Well, it's certainly an interesting way to look at things. Wouldn't be half suprised if something like this really did happen sooner or later though. And that narrator - cynical little thing, ain't he? And most certainly morbid! ...I like 'em. D
Amethyst Blood chapter 1 . 1/22/2003
Very nicely written. It is also very, very likely. x.0;; scary, if ya think about it. _

Good job! ::does the whole point-snap Andrew thing::

- AB
Fulcrum chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
I really liked this. I thought it was very entertaining. Short, too the point. A good piece of original fiction.