Reviews for Loud Silence
starlit blade chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
Well, if you're broken still, I could lend you my duck tape. Duct tape. Whatever.
Lauren chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
I like this one. It reminds me of an emptiness I once held inside of me.

While silence fills your thoughts, voices fill mine. Of "what ifs" and " who cares" , of loneliness when I'm not alone, of people and places I wish would cease , I wish would stay.

I like how you say no one must know.

But now I know. I remember when I thought it too. You drift in and out of it like tides that pull you under by their string whenever they want to tugg at your heart, your mind. It hurts. My string's still tied, but it seems to have grown weak with me.

yes, I really like this one.
Aftertaste of a Razorblade chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
Wow. Breathtaking.

'i can't cry to the heavens

without tge angels hearing'

The Postmodern Prometheus chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
Good but very depressing.
DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
The formatting was interesting as was the message it conveyed. I enjoyed the piece. GJ _