|Reviews for Desire|
| Icarus Sun chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
I was hesitant to read this. You wrote in your review to me that I should be drunk before reading any of your stories, and that gave me reason to anycase, you did review me, so I feel I should likewise review you.
But well, your format sucks. There is no way in hell that I, or any other sane reader, would attempt to decipher that solid block of text.
The story could have merit, but I wouldn't know. So I suggest you reformat it, repost it, and see what happens.