I loved this book its really a good read it was a bit confusing with who likes who and who's crazy but I really liked it and what you did at the end notes. Great story. :)

First of all, I love this story! I liked how it wasn't predictable and how I couldn't guess what would happen next. I definitely didn't expect Trent to be Toni, but looking back at it, I can tell that there are several clues that Trent knew Renae from before. (I guess I'm just really slow :D) Jade's schemes are definitely twisted, and at first I truly believed that she loved Pace. I think my favorite part was when Trent told Renae that he had 8 girlfriends. I just LOVED Renae's reaction before Trent started listing out all her nicknames. Anyway, I just wanted to say that this story is definitely very well planned out and keeps the reader hooked throughout the whole story. I definitely wouldn't mind reading it again!

Way to go! Bi guys w bf!

JENNA IS RENAE'S EX-GIRLFRIEND.

/dies laughing

OHMYGOD THIS IS HILARIOUUSS

see, i didn't get the synopsis, so i was like "wait. what? renae is that girl? ex-boyfriend? So, that means, Renae is a LESBIAN."

and then the last line of this chapter i literally (YES. LITERALLY) toppled out of my chair, and started scream "OH I SEE HAHAHAHAHA HE'S BISEXUAL, AND HE'S HOMOSEXUAL. RENAE. IS. NOT. A. LESBIAN. BAHAHAHAHA. I GET IT!"

yeah.

Great job! :D Loved the ending though it was a bit random finding the old letter..

Oh well, still loved it.

All I want is for Droven and Renae to be together! I hate Trent, he's a cheating dog.

Go Droven and Renae!

This ended up being a pretty good story

i liked it, i kinda figured out it was toni and trent as the same person. Happy about that too, glad those two are together. Great work.

aww. they are together :)

trent and renae :)

omg. i knew trent was toni.

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hahah. omg. the ending for chapter one immediately got my attention. lol. wow. what a shocker !

Omigosh! I just found your story - I'm new to fictionpress, hence the lack of an account. But oh my god.!I am slightly in shock right now because MY name is Renae too. Like, spelt EXACTLY like that! This is so cool.

Okay, I finally finished this story at 5:14 in the morning. I have to say, it's worth every single minute that I stayed up extra late for. I love all the couples that ended up together, and I like that Jade didn't really like Pace after all. Anyway, really great story with enough (more than enough actually!) twists to keep readers on their toes, and to keep them clicking 'Next Chapter' button. Satisfying ending as well. I think I might go re-read some of the chapters now.

“Hey, you know what? His face really reminds me of-“

I KNOW WHO! I was going "Oh my god!" for like half a minute straight. Haha.