Pretty good. Could develop that movie into a really good story! (hehe, spinoffs)

Wow, that was cool. Subliminal hinting of what is to come? I liked the diary idea. just grammer again

Okay, if she hates Pace so much, why agree to ROOM with him in Monteray? But I like the build-up, good.

Okay, not totally unexpected that Jade would do that. I think if she had such a pounding headache, sound would reverberate more in her head, like every spoken word would hurt and she'd be wimpering about a brass knocker knocking. But other than that little detail, was good

Okay, cool revelation. Might want to do some tense checking on stuff before hand (stupid grammer mistakes, that kind of thing). good ending. Renae seems to go back and forth a lot, strong to weak, and so forth. Then again, I guess a hangover would make anyone just want to say anything to make things more pleasant. I would have kinda expected Jade to scream a bit more, but still cool

Okay, like the way you got her to get drunk, good way to open up tension b/t Droven and Renae, just a few concerns. Shouldn't one be throwing up or passing out if one has had that much alcohol? Also, doesn't alcohol inhibit the gag reflex and that's why people choke to death on their own vomit, so how could she choke on the jell-o? And last thing, wouldn't she have a harder time getting up stairs if she was drunk? But overall, good. Vanessa and Carly true bitches.

Okay, back on the horse, getting back into the groove of the story, so forgive me for not submitting much in way of review, but tis a cool story.

This is now one of my favorite stories now! I would never have guess that Toni and Trent were actually the same person!

wow, great story!

Nicely done!

Wow, this was very nicely writen, I think that I have to give it like 14 out of 10!
It took me 3 days of rushing home to read NJAR, but it was so god! I loved the way that it ended up, and everyone (almost) got what they needed, if not wanted.
This is my first time reading your work, but trust me, it wont be my last!
The only sad thing..is now this story is over...*sniffs* but oh well, because the ending kicked $$!
off to read your other works~
Snowqueen/yukichan

Aw! Congrats on finishing an excellent story!
Renacy is a very pretty name, btw.
You did a spectacular job with the characters and the plot. So Jade wasn't a nut after all? Good deal.
You have no idea how much fun I had reading this.
Thanks
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dun dun dun!
Hey, just wanted to reiterate that this is one fantastic story! _
It's great. . . I hope it works out soon.

oi. . . maybe jade should get killed by a massive wave, tsunami style.
it would be such a tragedy! *sniffs*
Ok, I'm awful. *pouts*

geeze, and I knew it would get messy when jade dint get paired. Stupid little best friends!
gah!
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