-.- i didnt even read the whole story and i kno whats gonna happen droven and jade go out and trent a ranae go out and jade says it all was her whole plan after all.

I read this story in almost one day (I started reading it around 6 in the evening and finished around 3 in the morning). It was amazing! I loved the characters and the parts they had to play. I found myself picking favorites because I could associate with them. This is definitely one of my favorite stories!

fav's, hands down.

oh and about that last chapter.. i really like your quotes/lessons/etc part at the end ). I TOTALLY AGREE WITH YOU in the lessons thing about gay marriages.. wow i could rant about that forever, but it's close to midnight and i, err, want to read your other story and go through another sleepless night hahaha! you rock )!

o my god. i read this all in a single day lol.. well not really because it's past midnight now so, almost in a day.

i found your story on the SKoW awards page for "best love triangle" and i LOVE love triangles.. something about the jealousy and tension makes a story real good ). so then i saw that it was, hm, involving a gay couple? when i read the summary, so i was like this should be interesting. and MAN was it ever! i seriously loved this story and im definitely going to read your other ones.

i really like how you played/experimented with different sexual orientations, etc. because that can really make a difference in a relationship story you know! haha and because it suddenly opened many many new doors and different couplings (i really liked the poll thing at the end too, it really highlighted really how MANY possibilities there were in this story and how absolutely creative it was!). i also like how you didn't make such a big deal that OMG they're GAY or BI or whatever and just incorporated that into the story. lol except the GSA part which i thought was cute and reminded me of hermione's SPEW thing in harry potter :P.

wow you really weaved an intricate web with this one, though. there were so many characters interconnected. and so many SURPRISES. okay the part where trent became toni, i was really like O_O WHAAT i had to jump up and grab chocolate to sustain me through that chapter lol! and i ranted (in a good way) about it to my friend and made him check out this story too! wow i know you dropped hints everywhere because i went back through some chapters and collected them but you were so SUBTLE. it finally made everything make sense though and i think it was absolutely brilliant, even though everyone else probably caught it long ago. which is weird, because i've always foudn myself rather perceptive about such things :P.

and jade's scheming.. ahh sometimes this story got me frustrated because the characters were SO CLOSE but just not understanding. so i liked it when they talked and explained to each other to ease some tension off of ME haha. ahh all of jade's lil lies were really surprising too, because i believed her just like renae! and i think pace is so cute in a badboy way with angelic droven (cool (nick)name btw), even more so than trent/droven as a devil/angel pair! also, throughout the story i totally rooted for renae and trent.. i don't know WHAT the renae/droven fans were thinking! though a threesome would've been cute, but would've solved the problem way too easily. anyway, droven/renae too bland and sweet and sickly :P. and jade deserves someone.. eh poor her. sometimes she's so stupid, but i feel sorry for her.

oh and i liked the diary stuff surprisingly.. the parallels were nice and sometimes a bit too obvious but really cute to read. you recreated them well i think. i'm glad she found that extra diary at the end, because at first i thought she'd just be like.. oh and that was that in HER case but i made it different or something.

anyway this review is getting long.. LOVED the story and i will read more of your stuff. keep up the great work!

Congrats! This story has been nominated for winning the Most Creative Plot (Complete) section of our awards site.

/skow

I loved your story and I hope I can see more of them up eventually!

i really like it!:D

Wow.

Just. Wow.

I have to admit that the first few chapters had me doubting this story. Although the whole story was extremely well written, I wasn't completely engrossed until maybe three or four chapters in. I guess there was just something... off... about Renacy's complete and utter obsession with Trent. It just didn't make much sense to me, until Trent went to Monteray and Praya kept mentioning that Toni Jackson was back in town. And I kkept waiting for that to come up, and admittedly was cursing you for a while, because you kept making me second guess my guessing.

But man, once you got into this story you absolutely got it right. You got into each of the characters so thouroughly, even the ones without pure intent (although even Draven had his moments :)).

Great job. You got me hooked. :)

Bloody hell, this is absolutely brilliant.

I absolutely adore your character depth/devepment and you ahve Droven quoting smashing things and the whole Trent being Toni idea was completely and utterly absorbing!

Ooh. Just read in one of your reponses that you were Indian. Yey, go us!

Just one mistake: 'Pace: *Petafiles* are very common these days…'

(I really, really wish this type of reviewing had italics and bold and such. Meh.)

It's pretty good so far. I just thought I'd comment to let you know that Hades wasn't the equivalent to hell. It was just where the dead's spirits went and wandered aimlessly unless they were mind-blowingly good/heroic or unbelievably bad/evil. Nothing you hafta change, just thought I'd let ya know :)

hearts the story. droven's.. too pure, he's the angel isn't he? i love him! pace and him.. would be like polar opposites.. contrast )

beautiful story, and unique too!

Another wonderful story that I adored, although I must admit I missed some of the humour from Uncreative. Well, I realize that this story is more dramatic and angsty and all, and I suppose this is its very own charm. Renae and Trent, were, of course, my favourite couple from the beginning, but they were sometimes so clueless - argh! I feel pretty sorry for Jade, though, although I didn't really like her until half of the story, when the whole scheming thing was uncovered. What can I say, I like the multi-layered develpoment of the plot, and how there is always something more to a character that surprises you. Good work!

YOU ROCK! I hope you would write a sequel though, I really want Jade to be happy with someone. :)

p.s renae and trent forever!

this was absolutely great! but does jade have anybody? her love life is cursed, but she has awesome friends.