hey! it can't stop! im addicted! you have to keep writing! i want to know what happens, i want to know more about it! i love Renae... i love all your characters! please, as you can see by my liberal use of exclamation marks, i'm pretty excited. KEEP IT UP!

keep going this is really good!

Yay, a new story by ...u... YAY! The story sounds great.

Oh, and I really love Uncreativ7. It rocks... probably the best story in ffnet.

Okay, that's 'll Byez.

You are pure freakin genius! I love this story!

hm.. wow! Definitely very cool, and very different. What's up with Jade anyway? O_o? I have a feeling this'll be another smash hit, just like uncreative7 )

hahaha cool story, keep writing!

love the legolas reference also :)

oh btw, if you love HYD, have you ever heard of meteor garden? hehehe...

OMG OMG OMG! I love you so much. She wanted to chat with that Legolas-resembling boyfriend of his. That is by far the best sentance in this story. I love my elf. But I don't Love him more then my man. Wow this chap made me laugh so much.

WOO-HOO my word has made a comeback. Assfuck is in the building baby(wow how corny was that).

So wait a minute..Jade's boyfriend hits her. Yeah sounds like a loving relationship that's gonna last forever. I don't understand how women can degreade themselves like that. Staying in an abusive realtionship only hurts more then it would to get out. Shit like that really piss me off. Like my assfuck of a brother-in -law. He does shit like that to my sis..we all know it but there's nothing we can do because she all she does is deny deny deny.

I CANNOT BELEIVE THAT SHE SAID SHE WAS BI! I would die right there on the floor if i said that. I'm not kidding. that's horrible. Nice touch with the orgy thing. Hopefully if they have one they won't have a result like SRK. Know what I mean jellybean..and the sad thing is a lot of girls are self-absorbed bitches.

And you know what I want to chat eith that Legolas-resembling boyfriend of his too. If only he were real. ::sigh:: well if i can't have the actuall thing why not go for a cute substitute, right

Next time bizatch write responses to your reveiws..i liked it when you did that. And as always keep up the good work. And dream of Michael.

hahaha...great intro :Pheheh i cant wait for the next chappy )

oh please..please...update soon...i love this story!

OK where to start? Honey I love you and all that but what drove you to write this. Don't get me wrong it's good, but this is a little much even for me. And we all know I'm crazier then you. I just never expected something like this to come out of YOUR head. Know what I mean jellybean?

I feel bad for her. I would kill somebody if i had to move now. I mean I'm already through over half of my high school experience. I would be so pissed. I was already upset when i moved in the middle of 7th grade, and that was only across town. God forbid I'd have to change schools. I would be crying everyday. Because I can't live without my yaar!

SO there's actually a nice/hot jock...again! Why Zia do we have a thing for nice, intelligent. hot jocks. I think we do! Does Dave ring a bell? It's cool though we don't get a lot of that pretty much anywhere. And about this gorgeous guy with long tied back golden hair..only one thing comes to mind..LEGOLAS! But seriously that was such an assfuck thing to 's an ass.

About this girl Jade..I like her. And the name Evans surely does help a bit. Hot Topic...ahh the memories. I love my fairy by the way, she has a nice place sitting on my dresser. And i love it when her wings catch the light. Anyway..I love that store. We all do..it's great. That's another store I should never be allowed to be alone in.

I can't beleive you made these guys gay/bi. I never though I'd see the day. Apparently I was wrong. Maybe in your old age you've begun to loose your mind. And the plot your planning to. I think you've permanently confuzzled me. But that's ok it was gonna happen sooner or later.

Are you gonna try for the chap a day thing like last time? If not it's ok I'll wait. I'll be nagging you the whol time, but I'll still be waiting. Already want next chap. DO YOU SEE WHAT YOU DO TO ME! And you know I still havent read the last two chaps of ROL..that's ok once you get it edited you can send me the WHOLE thing.

Ok I think I'm done. See ya tomorrow, Don't forget my present...I wanna recover from the SAT's while watching it. Ok...Wish me luck..I wish you luch too.

this is good. hope you update soon

awsome beginning I want more