Reviews for Bonds Broken |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is how I feel in fights. its my fault and it will never heal. *sigh* I love the imagery you used, eg: "I sit quietly day after day/Eyes closed head bowed/Hands folded in my lap..". I also love the part when you use a pattern, "the love for your mother - gone" and etc. Perhaps you should follow up on why you think it was your fault. From the details like "I still know your thoughts/But you no longer know mine" it seems that he pushes you away... just a thought. Happy Hunting. laura |
![]() ![]() ![]() THis sucks balls, really big balls... Mwhahahahaha by-the-way i am a friend of jayne so :P you will be ruined... |