Aiie! She told him! WOOT! *hug* GREAT chapters (I read 6 AND 7), please update soon! :D I am LOVING this!

Why, oh why, must your computer be broken? Fantastically involving story. I'm dying to know what Artemis has to say, why the gods are so against her line, when Adrian's gonna tell Chris, what happened with Hannah and Mike, and any number of other unanswered questions!

I like your style. It's rare that dialogue can be done without notations on who's saying what, but I was never confused reading this. You don't spend too much time describing the characters, yet still leave the reader with a distinct picture. I'd like a better description on how the comm system works, but otherwise, thumbs up!

(im)Patiently awaiting the fixing of your computer and ensuing chapters.

you have to keep going. this story is so good. i cant wait to find out what happens between Chris and Adrian.

I find your story fascinating and well-written. Your characters are very well developed. Please write more soon! I only wonder what happened to Apollo, since he's always in any myth with his sister, and how he felt about her breaking of vows. The description of the Greek gods in modern-day times is also interesting, and I hope you expand upon it.

Whoops, the italics wouldn't show :) I'll try inserting spaces:

I That's how you do the italics, only without the spaces. / I

Hey, do somethin with that computer than! :)

Oh and you do italics like that. That is, if your writing in HTML.

Hey, am still far too lazy to login. Oh well. Hehe I like the complicated way in which Chris explains the reason he's watching her. Very funny.

You wanna know the reason why boyfriends are good? They are sweet, kind to you, make you laugh and they are so lovely.

Talk to you again girl, now both of us have updated! me more than you as usual though!

this was good, albeit a bit confusing, but interesting. i really like how you've brought the gods in, though i was confused during the ares part until i realized what was going on. and thank you for not leaving off at a cliffhanger since you're computer's down

i think i deleted the email you sent me the first time, thanks for sending it a second

this story is the shit, keep it up

Hey! So, now the moon is sort of in it. Alot about the gods in this one and we learn somethings about Adrian! YaY! Not including that you updated! You just made my day-er, night!

Love it! please update more, but could u iron out the really confusing parts? i mean how did Artemis have four kids but not know? and how was it that Diana's her daughter but Adrian is too, and what's w/ the curse?

OH. So Adrian's Artemis' daughter. Is Chris involved with Artemis? I'm Kinda confused about that. Other wise you cleared up a few things in that, but still confused.

Any way, great to see you again!

HUntress

I cant be bothered to login, sorry! Hey I'm over my cold by the way. THe bad news is I now have a cough. Ah well, such is life in England. Lets give up on the IM thing as mine is now playing up as well (kicks computer several times).

You rock too chica!

Oh, great chapter! This is getting REALLY interesting now.. heh.. please update as soon as you can! _

It only lets a signed-in person comment once per chapter so, I have to comment where I didn't comment. Anyways, I convinced my dad. YaY! My email address is:

? I don't care WHAT you call me. Just NOT babe. Aven?