|Reviews for Tit for Tat|
| Joe the sorta Wise chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
You know, I'm sure this is what would happen under the circumstances. That guy is a microcosm of all humanity. A great read, especially the rabbit-guards.
| FireFoxCP chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
I enjoy the style this one was written in. Specifically, the way it starts
out ordinary, then u-turns suddenly into pure-on "WTF?" territory with the
appearance of the two-headed bird. If I had anything to say about this
story, is that I think it's good enough there could be more to it. Why were
all these aliens gathered together? I mean, more than what is explained by
Ro'lex in the story. It follows a nice path from beginning to end, but
again, I liked it enough to want a bit of fleshing out in the middle. It
seemed a little quick-paced, how Jen and Ken reconciled at the end, but that
didn't detract all that much. Maybe work that in to happen more gradually
if you were to flesh it out somehow? I hope I'm not sounding flippant or
snooty here at all. Just offering my $0.02 on things. Looking forward to
my next read!
| InMemoryofPhil chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
wow, this was really long. may i suggest separating it into smaller chapters? it'll be easier to get through. some of it kinda threw me off, but it's fun to be confused sometimes :) hehe
| Quilir chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
Heheheh, very rn good!
Violent at the end too. But i like it! Keep writing!
| Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
First of all, thanks for the review of Prodigal Warrior. I hope you got my email.
I think it would be helpful and even funnier if there were at least one scene about the aliens bumbling about choosing who to pick up as representatives. In fact, it might be even be more humorous if inviting these two kids to this alien party actually stops an invasion. Maybe these two kids seem "too crazy and dangerous. What if all humans are like that? Oh no! Let's get out of here."