ohh so u made me a walking bathroom who nice of u li li

good! that last part reminded me STRONGLY of

you-know-who! Lol!

Lol! you can really tell who wrote this Dispiza but, it's good! The fifth chapter you have done, right? I thought you said you did.

Hi Eliza. It was VERY good. but i must insist you use spell check. and PLZ read my story! PLZ Oh,. don't forget. WRITE MORE! _ Oh ya. Hi Katie, Hi Mary, Hi Amanda, and Hi Carol.

~Shango~

I reviewed this! Sorry Yumi but, my reviews are messing up again & I'll just give you mine at school. IF THIS GOES THROUGH!

Sounds good! You still don't like spaces or apostraphes, do ya? I was reading that and I got some ideas: Wouldn't I blend into the shadows more if I got dark skin? & why does my hair get LIGHTER, of all things? But, I guess I can't complain. I ~did~ make you think up it yourself... My shirt. You'll have to draw it for me at school tomorrow. What else did I want to comment about...Oh ya! You need to change your reviews so people *coughmecough* can review w/out being signed in. ~Sionen!

Hey! Dispisa! I thought my name was YumiKaze, remember? DreamWind? Other than that, everything sounded great! I would comment more but, I gotta go; it's dinner.

~Seeya!