Reviews for Eyes to the Future
Tiger Girl chapter 1 . 2/4/2003
Oh, sorry, I just gave you the link to my Elfwood page. The main page is here: .
Tiger Girl not signed in chapter 2 . 2/4/2003
This is AWESOME! What a diabolical test! Keep going with this, I love it! I hope we're going to get more background soon! What makes the Outsiders outsiders? BTW, this story would be great on Elfwood, a site for amateur writers of sci-fi and fantasy. Check it out! .
ving chapter 2 . 2/1/2003
i really licked it
ving chapter 2 . 2/1/2003
i really licked it
Tiger Girl too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 1/24/2003
I really like the start of this story! I hope you continue it! I found the switch from first person to third person after the first two paragraphs a bit confusing, but other than that, I think this is great! I'm full of questions that I hope you'll answer by writing more! What are the Forces, and who are the Outsiders? If they're all humans, how did they become separated? What happens to Dominique? Please write more!