|Reviews for Addiction|
| mango surprise chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
lol- i love all that stuff at the bottom, don't u? copyright 2003 Chocolate Hotpants. hehe! makes it look so professional! and shld be in a book, neways. hehe.
and the thing i liked best about this poem is (lol!), that u had like little run overs into the next line- like 'proper' poetry does, hehe! and it flows really well wen u do that, hehe.
and aw with this poem u cld just see how much the.. addictor? (lol, please tell me that IS a word wen it isn't!) pines over that someone, lol! is just lovely how all ur poems are about different things, hehe.
and u repeat stanzas, too! which is like, more lyrical lol, which leads me back to a)u use words so well, and b) ur obsessed with lyrics! hehe!
newho- FAB sweetie! ur so talented.
| idontwriteherenomore chapter 1 . 2/9/2003
Nice job hun!
I specially liked the way you repeated the first werse all the wya... it gave a nice effect!
| blackanarchy chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
yups, i know that feeling too... it's really, really painful... gd poem too. :)
| Free Soul chapter 1 . 1/25/2003
Nicely done...i know a friend that would love this poem. I'll have him read it to. I love your ability to make the poem flow. Wonderfully written. :) thanks for posting it
| Needa S chapter 1 . 1/25/2003
Isn't love grand when you have someone special. Good job! Keep writing!