Reviews for Sleep Air
Just Wolf chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
that was so beautiful. breathtaking. i loved the descriptions. especially the "he lived on her kisses/ in her kisses." the whole story was such a whipsy image, hard to capture, but very beautiful. like a dream. or a surreal memory
Vuelo chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
You know what... i dont know if it is that the girl left him, or if the girl died. I like it if the girl died, it makes the story even sadder, that he would still write long letters to her of the things she'd never see. I liked that line, for some reason i felt like i could relate to it a lot...

this it short and sweet, but a heartwrenching example of good writing! Keep up the fantabulous work!


P.S. Thanks so much for your review of "Can a ROck have a Heart?" I like hearing that i'm too critical of myself cuz i guess that kinda reassures me that i'm not as bad as i make myself seem sometimes... thanks
Rhia chapter 1 . 2/28/2003
Cool story. too bad I don't have bf. Oh well. _ Anyways, I didn't kno ur e-mail address, so these r my fave bands:

Avril Lavigne

Michelle Branch

Vanessa Carlton

Boxcar Racer

Blink 182

The All-American Rejects

Good Charlotte -Rhia
twisted-monster chapter 1 . 1/30/2003

I love it

and you're right sipked belts are cool ;)
Anna Vashdalal chapter 1 . 1/27/2003
I am always jealous of you. it's not fair! We both read the same books and you write better stories. God hates me.

Oh wait.

He'd have to exist.

Anyway, very good piece, very sad. Reminds me of one of my he/she pieces.