Reviews for The Path Together
penguinscribe chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
pretty. i like it. unfortunately, i am not a poem connoisseur, so i can offer no constructive critisism for poetry. but i do think it's a good poem. well, i shall toddle off now... bye
gold against the soul chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
I like this, it's so assured and soft. Kind of beautiful. Might sound strange, but when I read it, the words sound whispered.

A poem of whispers. Lovely.

Thankyou for you review on Water Spirit. Much appreciated. And you keep up the good work too! :)
Adam chapter 1 . 8/28/2003
Very emotional. I liked it a lot, keep on writing :)
MelodyReiterLee chapter 1 . 4/13/2003
Good job. _ It has a calm and enlightening touch.
Lady of Stars chapter 1 . 3/10/2003
I know that you were thinking of translating this into Elvish to fit what you thought of as "the meaning" for this story, but I think this could very well be a sign of hope in everyday life! This is wonderful!

PS-Thank you for reviewing my story!

-Lady of Stars-
Megan chapter 1 . 2/10/2003
Pssst! The and the tags don't work because likes to laugh sadistically at people when they use them! Listen! You can hear them now...

*from a distance*


...Okay. I might just be making that all up...except for the tags-not-working part of it. ;-)