It is a good poem keep writing.

That is so sad and sweet!

awwwww

Lilolu! I have to e-mail you and get you to look at a few things.

I'm wondering if I should post or not?

You okay with that?

Hey again,

Still dont like the line. And now that I read it again... It has a nice rhythm up to Later. And then the lines start getting too long and you lose it. For example: "I only thought that Later was a day that would come when you had hair again" Maybe... you could say

I only thought that Later was a day that would come...

When you would have hair again

Your freckles standing out because of your red hair, not your pale face,

Do what you want it is pretty good.

Just like trying to make your life difficult.

Yours truly,

Staple Gurl

You could go swimming with having to change a bandage?

What does that mean. It doesn't make any sense!

But the rest of it was really well written. Captured the image.

StapleGurl