|Reviews for Scout|
| juniorr12 chapter 1 . 2/21/2004
This is a good beginning. I am interested in what is to come. There are a few grammatical issues that need to be corrected:
Instead of "Lords' eyes" it should be Lord's eyes.
Instead of "S'sskylklyas' two sets of eyes" it should be S'sskylklyas's two sets of eyes.
Good. Write more.
| Aryaveiel Skycryer chapter 1 . 3/10/2003
Thank you so much for reviewing! What a happy person am I.
On the story; I'm not much for Sci-Fi (except Michael Crichton), so I can't judge the content, but I liked your use of language. Gave a very precise view of what was happening. Good description of the relationship between "complements" as well. If I were a Sci-Fi fan, I'd be all over this one.
| James Rain chapter 1 . 3/3/2003
This is extremely well-written, but the character's names are hard to pronounce, I kept seeing and saying Chrysler in my head insted of Khyssher. Still, a nice read. I believe he's going to Earth, so I wonder who he'll meet when he gets there.