Reviews for Smoke in the Wind
starlit blade chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
*mock seriousness in voice* I'm sensing a wall between us. You can't seem to get out, and I can't open the fricking window cause it's jammed.
Alexiajennine chapter 1 . 2/12/2003
the feelings that you put in the poem I can feel, it's very good
NovaKayne chapter 1 . 1/30/2003
oooh...*tingly* Good poem...I like the stagnant waters and blunt nails. GJ! :-D
Aftertaste of a Razorblade chapter 1 . 1/29/2003

That's good. I love the imagery.