'When we miss

our second wind,

but catch a third instead'

I love this line, I know this sounds lame but I never saw life in terms of multiple chances and how we can always make up for what we've lost but I feel like there is hope again. So thank you. You've touched me with your words.

-Dee

*thinks immediately of Night by Elie Wiesel* ARGH! Teachers are taking over my mind! *runs away* Great poem, BTW. :D

You reviewed my work, so I thought I'd do you the same courtesy. And I don't mind long reviews.

As to this, I quite like it. The rhyming scheme is really interesting, and I like the message a lot. I'm afraid I'm not really good at saying what I think in reviews. *sigh*

Excellent! This flows nicely! Keep writing! _

Cool. It reminds me of the poem "Dreams" by Langston Hughes.

~Heart of the Sword

cool poem I love the message. keep up the good work.