lol I like the random y in the last line :D

lol wtf? random as shit science experiment

*evil laughter* oh he felled. xD

oh gosh. and THAT is why I hate the hired help! can't keep a god damn secret and in five minutes the entire house knows everything.

lmao. why the hell is Aoi such a god damn spaz?

That was a sexy ending. I applaud you for it.

A Y! I SEE A Y! U liar! HAHA! I SEE A Y! Anyhows, Likeing the story so far! Faved it!

AH! YOU REPEAT PARTS OF THE SENTENCE BEFORE PARTS OF THE SENTENCE BEFORE MOVING ON! I FEEL LIKE I'M LISTENING TO A SKIPPING CD! *twitch* *twitch* AH! *clutches head and passes out*

i lyk the way u wuld make ur chapters in2 short poems kewl!

um... but the chapter before didn't even really imply sex. _

nu! its over! T_T *read it in one night* wow, i really need to get a life...nah! I like reading fiction too much to do that! I loved the story! Very bizzare, happy, and yaoi, did i mention yaoi?

YES YES YES YES! MALE PREGNANCY! XD *sings* *coughs* yes, we like male pregnancy *nervous laughter*

oh ho! I spot a y in the midst of all the z's!

Aoi is awsome! I haven't gotten that far yet, but yeah *almost expects to see the 'i know a song that gets on everyones nerves' song to be sung* I like what I've read so far, its all quite amusing -

i love this story so much! its So CUTE! tho- Aoi getting pregnet kindda pissed me off, but you pulled it off nicely! XD8