first: i'm in love with this story.

second: there is a 'Y' in there!

All right! I approve of this little story very much.I am an atrociously huge fan of homosexuality and vampires, so this was a delectable little read.

Check out the story my friend and I are writing. It has vampires and homo- erotic themes also.

And it i . Not yaio.

That is a truely good story! _

omg! i love this story it is hilarious!

but you know what i really love?

the titles of the chapters. they make poems! maybe i am a bit slow, but hey

i love the first one

if i give you my hand

so you can stand

on your two feet

will you dance with me?

that is so romantic

im gonna use that sometime, if i have ur permission!

please email me!

luv it lots!

ashleigh

The last few paragraphs were different but I liked it none the less.

god, so close to the end and we aren't getting there any faster, why is that?

sorry, it won't let me sign in. Okeday, not everyone is a flamer, and you already know I'm not, i would be so happy to see there little asses cussed out to their faces. Well, I hope to see more, catch yah later.

Regardless of flamers, you have the rest of us that read your story and look forward to your new chapters with much excitement; in light of that, it seems rather odd to me that you would then punish the polite ones with shorter chapters as well as verbal nastiness. I understand that you are annoyed, but please take it out on the ones deserving or just ignore them, but don't lay into the rest of us. I feel that's impolite and very unfair, considering we all had nothing to do with it. From reading your reviews, mostly everyone has been nothing less than appreciative of your efforts and the time you have taken to write this story...and have Been as well as still Are thankful for your kindness in sharing it. Please try to remember those good comments when next your irritated by some passing idiot, otherwise, those of us that look forward to reading your wonderful story to Relax, will loose interest because it's no longer an enjoyable experience.

yay! you didn't put a clifhanger this time *glomps* I lovezezezez you...

you know, you can get a bit confusing a times. Now Aoi's pregnant, hwich I laughed at. But now you have to continue, oh, and for a mention of more reading material if you no mind, I have new chaps to my stories up and posted, I don't think you've read always friends yet.

Raven

Now that you have a new keyboard, and trust me, I know. You have to continue, the demon Rain.

Well THAT was unexpected! Wonder how that happened :0) well, I have to go look at my chapters as I put them up since FP screwed them up last time, so, good luck with your keyboard and hopefully the "pregnancy" goes well!

NO! HOW COULD YOU RIGHT SUCH AND EVIL CLIFHANGER! plus this chappie was INCREADIBLY short. I feel sad now. :(

Yup, the way Gee died was better. ;) Update when you feel like it, I'll be waiting!

Okay, I'm not a fan of slash, but this is really actually good:) Don't sick Alka on me...! Anyway, I thought maybe, since Aoi is an angel, if he has to like get one of those souls, that a really powerful demon could try and find him or somehow kidnap him and it leaves Alka and Fox to find him...Just an idea...Since you're running outta ideas with your Z's! And, you don't have to kill me, I've already added like three chapters on my Moon Maiden story (Self-Promotion it's cool:) Well gotta go, hope you continue and maybe you'll read some more of my little story! Bye!