Reviews for Hephaestion Alone in Athens
Ish chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
Wow.. Beautiful. Intense.
Karbon Okapi chapter 1 . 2/1/2003
This makes me wish I knew more about ancient Greece! You have so much talent, I'm really amazed.
E. Gao chapter 1 . 1/31/2003
I don't know why, but I really admire how you use punctuation to full effect in separating/uniting lines, so forth, et al. (bah.)

It's really innovational, for some reason. I'm usually a stickler for conventional punctuation, but in your case I'm more than willing to make exceptions. I think it's because of the lushness of your images, the implications of every line. I'm gushing, aren't I?

ShinigamiForever chapter 1 . 1/29/2003
Hephaestion comes alive again under your skillful hands. Alexender and his lover always touch a spot in my heart, and I love this poem for this reason. That and you're good.