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Strong chapter. Some laughter in the end.

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Cool chapter. I'm not a fan of Algabra. Actually no offense to the people who like it, but its boring. But anyway... Nice continuation.

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Great start. Intense. Mysterious. I'll continue later.

Hey Chris!

First of all, I was very disappoionted with the ending coz it didn't came with my expectations. It was very surprising yet in the end i felt a little pity, with Jerry. and oh by the way, did parson get out coz i didn't get it well enough! The host was really pathetic yet i liked it very much! Hehehe... I cannot wait for the next book!

Till then...

You story is truly one of my collections that will never fade until I die!

Shea

*Cries* that was such a good story! Boo hoo! But.. You say it is a trilogy, eh? Hee hee hee hee... I'm going to go cry again now...

That was really good! STUPID HOST I HATE U! Hee hee everything is good now!

Chris!

Well... it's just like old times!

It keeps getting better and better you know! Except for the spelling i guess

Anyway, keep up the good work! Thnx for the review! I am really touched!

Shea

Might want to go over the spell check again. You spelled right 'rigkkht' and dieing is supposed to be spelled 'dying' (well in Canada it is becuase Americans spell night nite) Other than that, it was awesome! KEEP GOING!

Dang nabit. PLEASE FINISH THE STORY SOON! It is so much better than Moonlight. It keeps me on the edge of my seat. (I fell out of my chair in Chpater 8 O_O) Please finish soon!

So good! One more chapter!

I'm so excited to read more. Got to read more...

That stupid host... he scares me! Anthem, this is such a great story i cannot tell how superior it is. So much good use of words, and you get to like the characters and you can actually feel their emotions. But why did Jerry have to die? I want to kill you for that but then you wouldn't be able to write more stories so I won't do that. I love this story! I am going to tell the whole world about it!

YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER! THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I REALLY REALLY LOVE IT! It keeps on getting better. I can't wait to know what happens next. I'm so excited!

This is such an awesome story! It would be such a good movie! It is so good and getting even better at the moment! I like your style of writing. This story is SOO good!

Note: In chapter 6, you know that song, the Entertainer? I play that like a million times a day... It's a good song! _

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