This is superb. My only complaint is the grammar and the fact that the characters don't act realistic in the least. But, that's just my opinion, it's not very detrimental to the storyline at all, keep at it!

more, more, more, more, MORE! its good! keep writing, keep writing! I can't wait till more gets writen! Hurry, hurry, Hurry! write, write, write! Work on spelling and grammar. Otherwise good! more than good, its GREAT! keep it up, keep it UP! :)

pretty good. Keep it up! can't wait till you post more! Talk to you later!

Pretty good, though it really stinks that they blotted out the code. It really takes away from the story. Talk to you later!

Tee-hee! Tee-hee! Nice chapter! That's freaky, I thought that Chirstina and her mom were dead. I was scared. But then I realized that it was all a dream, just like Jerry. (also, thanx for putting my work into your story! I can't believe that u actually put that! I was so proud! I feel so special!)

Hey! Why can't you finish the story? *cries* I want to konw what happens! _ Keep writing!

Yeah, Jerry and jessie! hehehe, pretty good. keep it coming!

Good start, really unique plot.