Reviews for Suburban Midnight
Burkoski chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
I really like this story. I swear you cannot go wrong with the name Tristan.
betawithoutu chapter 7 . 11/10/2003
hey i like the story so far but in the french bit u need to have 'pierre a un crayon rouge' cos else it doesn't make sense

French-Fille chapter 10 . 10/21/2003
Sweet, cute, covers-your-butt-for-like-2-weeks, and short (kind of like 5% of a story, y'know?).

Well at least you haven't given up on Suburban Midnight! (YAY!)
Isil chapter 10 . 10/19/2003
I just love this story...

Actually I love most of your stories, so maybe I'm biaised -

I just think Perry and Jake don't hae enough action... I think they're cute!
Nightmare chapter 10 . 10/18/2003
THis is really good. THeres so much feeling in it. Kieran is just adorable. I hope you continue soon.
ddz008 chapter 10 . 10/18/2003
Great story!

I really like your story, it's so nice and the characters are lovely!

Keep writing, please!
kalmia raphael chapter 3 . 10/11/2003
...cripes. i double-reviewed. that shouldn't even be POSSIBLE. i'm so sorry! i think i hit the review button of chapter one twice, and the thingy said i'd already reviewed, and i thought that was some OTHER review i wrote AGES ago and reviewed AGAIN... oh hell. sorry. clogging up your review board with that and this, now, too. bah
kalmia raphael chapter 2 . 10/11/2003
... i think i reviewed already, but i'll review again, just in case...

really like this story, though not as much as Dearly Beloved or Last Beautiful Girl. i always like band fics... and the character interaction is fun. i like the way they (tristan and kieran) met... also the difficulties they faced while touring. i forget where i got up to... the laughing-about-fanfics i think... anyway, i'd like to see the whole tension-release of tristan not telling kieran all his problems/past. (maybe you already did that and i haven't read it yet
kalmia raphael chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
... i was -sure- i reviewed this! o.O well... i'll review again to make sure. i don't like this one as much as Dearly Beloved or Last Beautiful Girl, but i still think it's good. i really like band fics, for some reason... and the character interaction is fun ; i like the way they meet the most, and then the difficulties they face because of the touring etc... very nicely put. i can't remember where i got up to... i think just the part when they were laughing about fanfics... well, i want to see the whole tension-release about tristan not telling keiran about his past/problems. also i think tristan's past should come into play some time... plus, i think there should be some more conflict between jake and perry! honestly, i love those two... i think i like them more than the main couple actually.. o.O but... after they got together... nothing else seemed to happen between then
ShadowGal chapter 9 . 9/17/2003
:huggles all the boys:

:huggles Kate too:

Okay. You must update. Soon. Please. :begs:
ShadowGal chapter 8 . 9/17/2003
I just love the idea of the guys reading fanfics about themselves, even if it is due to Kate. If I were famous, I'd so look up fanfiction about myself! Or, rather, my characters, since hopefully I'd be a famous *writer*...

Great chapter, gotta go read the next one before I fall asleep at my computer desk. ::scampers onward::
French-Fille chapter 9 . 8/23/2003
Ahh, I love these duos with you and Hope, BM! Your writing really compliments one another- the styles work together nearly perfectly.

There is a but. The but is that I don't think you guys really put as much into this as "Dearly Beloved". The characters are somewhat weaker: that interview was the last time I saw Perry's personality for a couple of chapters (can anyone see a modern Sodapop from "The Outsiders"?). I'd say that the weakest character is Jake with his case of chronic shyness from the fic cam- or as shy as Suburban Midnight guys can be! His relationship with Perry seems stronger if Kate keeps cluing us into the SM boys' pasts, and works her way into more intimate details of them. She's the reader's only liason to piece those guys together. The only other character I must intervene for is Kieren. Goodness, once he met Tristan he seemed a tad abandoned like Jake- only making out with the other and seeming clueless like heck 70% of the time. Maybe that's just me.

The plot? The plot's pretty normal, yet somehow inventive. It must have been the two of you's brain child for the longest time.

To end on a funny note with a tiny mistake in it- my favorite part so far in Suburban Midnight. And it was Tristan's French: "Hello, my name's Tristan. How are you, I'm great. Do you want to sleep with me? Pierre has a red crayon." (You forgot the French verb in the last sentence, though: "Pierre _a_ un crayon rouge).

Keep it coming!
Sei-Hishida chapter 9 . 8/20/2003
Yep, you're the greatest author in the world! well, at least to me at the moment...
Cris Jones chapter 9 . 8/14/2003
Good chapter. I'm glad Tristan is going home.
Aubreys-Master chapter 9 . 8/9/2003
I like that chapter. I really do! Update soon!
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