Although there's no real consistancy in the rhythm, the idea behind the words and the words themselves made up for that - big time. Good job on this.

Very good poem. It's right to the point, and it leaves a kind of feeling that I can't describe.

Wow... Brilliant... This is a really good poem...

Short but concise and to the point, i really really do like it... Well done *claps* _

~FCD~

Oh hey its okay... dont worry about it. That poem's also pretty neat... you must just have some ever going wheels in your head that keep spitting out poetry cuz DAMN you write a lot of it! wish i could do that lol

-Me