I love this:) It's very poetic yet sincere, because I can feel these sensation are real. Sounds pretty epic to me though, to have a real falcon claim its pray right before your eyes. It's refreshing to see that someone is still so affected by the signs of nature. But that's the way it is, right? If you're weak and no one's there to save you, you die. You can either shrug or decide to protect as many loved ones as possible:)

Beautiful work. It must have been very creepy to witness that and feel those feelings too. It was a sign that someone sent you. That I can tell.

Touching and inspiring. Very nice.

*Sigh* I don't quite know what the world is coming to. And your fic really reflects that. IMO, peace (and innocence) long died. And now. the future is dangerous for everyone. It's so sad.

. . . wow. That's just. . . stunning. Maybe the Fates(or whatever you believe in) led you out there at that moment, just to experience an omen. Very vividly written, I love it.

this is good this is true, nice job. touching story.

the laura

T_T This is so touching!