Reviews for Alone In A Desert
deepdown chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
'we will never be alone'

talk about an ending... such strong imagery, well done.
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
I can picture someone all alone in the desert just wandering, trying to find their way. This is a great image poem. Oh, I know you didn't rhyme in this one, but you really are great a rhyming contrary to what you told me.

Cirien Phoenix
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
I loved this line -

"Shunned from normal

Exiled away from cynical

Only left to be individual"

What an awesome way of putting it. I dunno why I like it so much...I just...do.

Keep writing!

Namir Swiftpaw
Werewolf Nighteyes chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
Wow. I like this! Man, I'm never sticking my feet in a desert...depending on the situation. If you're gonna offer me money to do it then...
Callik9 chapter 1 . 2/1/2003
Very morbid...it's you!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 2/1/2003
Wow...this was really cool. I liked the whole concept behind it. Keep up the good work!

Heart of the Sword
Princess Mulan chapter 1 . 2/1/2003
This is a really lovely poem. You are a great writer!

I love the ending/the last sentence. You did a wonderful job writing this!
Niphridell chapter 1 . 1/31/2003
*_* Hello! This poem was really cool! I like the last stanza. It really ties it all together *_*

-Nev