I loved it, truly amazing.

My favorite line was, it was brilliant!: 'Specks of wave to clouds of white'

Superb poem :-D

Send Let Me Go, One Two Three Four, and Flame Dancers.
I especially liked One Two Three Four. It's beautifully written!

Okay, I've read enough! You are SO going to be on my Favorite Authors list! I like the first three poems (although I might be writing this too late and you've already chosen). Please write more.

these are really good! put in "let me go" that's my fave