Reviews for Darkness
Embyr Black chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
that was a great poem kinda decribes me in a strange way ne wayz gr8 job
Zainab chapter 1 . 2/26/2003
I love the beat in this one. Excellent job.
MelodyReiterLee chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Nice. Good format. Keep writing.
restless-wandering chapter 1 . 2/9/2003
I know the feeling. Good job :)
Blondieprincess chapter 1 . 2/9/2003
I like the word play and how things are changed to mean different things.
Blondieprincess chapter 1 . 2/9/2003
I like the word play and how things are changed to mean different things.
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
This is good.

I like the darkness, though - I'm a being of the night. XP But, this kind of darkness you are speaking of is much more sinister.

The short, concise way it was written made it more powerful, I think.

Nice work. Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw
jen chapter 1 . 2/1/2003
wow... that's totally deep! i love how you use effects like "Eyes never seeing" and "Heart never loving" it's totally awesome!