Reviews for Mistake
deepdown chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
short, but my god how strong. it is somewhat detached, so i cant gather whether you are upset or not, or indeed if it was a real event. but im not sure if that is actually a bad thing...
Callik9 chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
What's inspiring all this?
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 2/8/2003
Nice work! I like how you contrasted the past and the future.

Heart of the Sword
chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 2/8/2003
Hey, this is kinda good! I like this! Short but descriptive. I really like this line: "A(n?) iridiscent glow approaches". That was good...

Whee! *disappears*
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 2/5/2003
Sad, sad, sad poem. Kinda chilling too. It's been a while since I checked up on you. Glad I did. Anyway, keep it
Toad-Frog chapter 1 . 2/3/2003
Sad. But, you did a great job putting it together. K/Writing!
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
Oh, Christ, that's sad. -_-

I like it, though - very short, simple, and to the point.

Keep writing poetry! I would like to see some more from you.

Namir Swiftpaw
Toireasa chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
Whoa... that's a little unusual. I like it though. . I saw two mechanical errors in the third line, but just simple little misspellings. Good job, I like it. Oh, and thank you for the review. .

Toireasa
DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
How utterly sad. A watery grave...*sighs*