|Reviews for Waking the Land|
| R. Ficst chapter 7 . 2/17/2014
Alas, it seems I will never see where you planned to take this adventure. I really wish I could have.
Whatever you're up to with your life now, I wish you well of it, and good luck with any and all future writing endeavours.
| MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 7 . 1/27/2009
i was about to beg you for an update but i see it has been 6 years since you have touched this story.
you have taught me a great lesson about looking at the last update before starting a story. It was almost cruel to read thorough such a wonderful story and then find out that i will never know out how it ends.
im sure you have your reasons. everyone does. but it still doesn't change my mind about how i feel.
if you ever do pick this up again, just know there is at least one guaranteed reader waiting patiently
| prancu chapter 7 . 11/29/2008
I just read your story all the way through from ch 1 to ch 7, and let me tell you that I'm awestruck with your brilliance. It's so well written, with one event leading clearly to the next in perfect sequence. Also, the characters are very well developed and the reader can relate to them well. I had a 20 min presentation for school that I should have been doing, but I couldn't stop reading your story. In ch. 7 that abrupt revealing of Auley's past is intense and surprising but it was hinted well in previous chapters. Am i correct in assuming that the strange book Casimir saw behind the fairy tale book has something do with the mystery? That's my brilliant assumption, but of course I can't be certain because you're the genious writer here. Anyway, keep up the great work and update soon! Please!
| Subbie chapter 7 . 9/21/2008
OOH, we have PLOT!such an amazing thing!
I really like how the intro to the story was almost like a seperate story completely, and then suddenly there's all these new things coming in after that part.
I also think that the way you made Auley skittish of sex and rather intmate stuff like that because of Vaymas ingenious. And then the way that Casimir accepts everything without question from Auley is just so perfect. it's like they were made for each other.
| the-typical chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
| Awsome17 chapter 7 . 1/12/2008
Wow! This is very good. if u lyk writing this kind of stuff, I think I have the perfect book for you to read. It is called Shield of Stars. It is by Hilari Bell. It is the first book in it's series. And it also has lttle bits of shounen ai. I think you would ennjoy this book emencly even though it is a little easy to read. Update soon bc this story has got me hooked and u r realing me in.
| LaylaLivesLoosely chapter 7 . 12/11/2007
Looks like this story's been deserted, but I enjoyed it ]
| purple sea chapter 7 . 8/15/2007
nice story but the last chap is kinda unbelievable.
| Nesquik Girl chapter 7 . 4/24/2007
Auley is the "act done out of kindness", isn't he? Casimir's brothers... played... with him but he was nothing but kind with Auley. Is that it? Am I way off? I'd really like an answer...
It's amazing how the story changed drastically from start to pseudo-"finish". How it took the fairy tale turn after the falling in love part. I didn't see that coming. I actually thought the seventh chapter was the last one but apparently not.
I hope you'll continue it... Pretty please?
| Tisbee chapter 7 . 4/19/2007
Just wanted to say what an awesome time I had reading this story. It was great to begin with, and even better when I began to understand the bigger plot you had (have?) in store. I realize it's been a long time since you've updated, and I know full well that never means anything good when you're a busy author, but please know that I'm a corrupted fan, and I would love it if you'd continue. :)
| Rubadub chapter 7 . 2/18/2007
Heh... I started this story right when I was about to go to sleep with the intention of reading the first chapter and then retiring to bed but got sucked in. Now it's really late and I have to get up extremely early in the morning to go to a workshop on a program called DTBY for babysitting and educating little kids. I'm going to be immensely tired and possibly cranky. The thing is...
I don't regret it one bit.
This is a mesmorizing story I must say and I hope you update soon.
| Kyle's Precious Little Girl chapter 7 . 1/28/2007
Oh my god! This story is so awesome! I love how you've involved all the fairy tales and stuff. That will surely make this story very interesting!
I can't wait 'till you update! Please do so soon!
| Gravilove19 chapter 7 . 12/19/2006
I love your story and I really wish you would update XD good luck.
| Not Good Enough For Heather chapter 7 . 11/20/2006
i dont know whats wrong with you
but you need to update
maybe you've had writers block...
for three years...
but that doesn't mean you should just give up!
this is a great story
continue it please? mmk?
| Jowaco chapter 7 . 11/6/2006
Wow! This is an amazing story, altough would it be safe to say that there might not be an update coming in the near future?
Would love to read more from you!